After I completed combining my 3 papers together I realized that I need to work on my transitions a little more. I probably need to make them a little longer because as of right now they’re kind of boring and don’t really flow together. I also ended up going back into my paper and changing the Introduction a little bit and also the Literature Review. I just found that by adding some little things that it made my paper a little more interesting to read.
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Hey Katie,
I also have to make my tranistions better. I need to change some things in my papers as well. Good job for changing some things in your papers to make them better.