Here is my Intro
just remember its a shitty first draft.
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First Goal Statement:
The purpose of my intro will be to introduce my topic and give some background information on it for the readers. I also want it to hook the reader so they “want” to read more. By the end of this paper I hope to set clear goals for my research, and also to provide background information on my topic about Shopping Addiction. My paper will be prepared for anyone to read because I think that my topic is something that other people may not know much about so I think that they would be curious to read it. I hope that everyone in my class will want to read my paper and give me feedback on how they feel about it. I also hope that that consumers will want to read my paper when it is finished. My main goal for this paper is to get a better understanding on why college age students go into debt so early in their life.
End Goal Statement:
The purpose of my into was to introduce my topic and give background information about shopping addiction to many readers. I wanted to hook the reader at the very first sentence by using a quote from a movie that I thought was cute, funny, and that related to my research. I stated my research question at the end of my paper so that any reader would know what I plan to accomplish in my research. I think that by giving information about shopping addiction in my paper can help readers be more interested in reading my paper. I think for the most part that I accomplished my goals for this paper for the first draft.