Peer Review 1

I peer reviewed Tempess John’s paper- the rubric is attached to her actual paper.

Positives

1. I’m very interested in your paper because dreams are very fascinating.
2. I think you did a good job explaining dreams, and giving information about them.

Negatives

1. You only cited two things in the whole paper, you should have a lot more than two.
2. You repeated a lot about Martin Luther King Jr. and should have incorporated more about interior designers.

Positives

1. You organized your facts and information well.
2. You had very little grammar/mechanic errors.